Something to show, nothing too good

There needs to be quite a few improvements to this (no offence). The bodies didn't have joints and didn't turn. The text to voice speech is annaoying and over-used, so it would be best to record them next time and the plot was very thin. It was also too quick.
Not a terrible Flash, just something that can easily be improved.

My best 15 minutes on Newgrounds

I really enjoyed this one. The graphics were near flawless and the writting was very solid. I didn't like having to link to another game during the peloader as oppose to Decline 2. Some of the voices (Tom's for example) were a bit too sensitive and louder than the rest of the movie.
Besides a few minor flaws, that was a good movie and worth seeing even if you don't like the whole video game paridy thing (I don't usualy).

The world wasn't ready for this

I've been following the work of David Firth from 'Scribbler' to 'Salad Fingers', 'Burnt Face Man' to 'Panathonikos Bear' and I'm yet to see any flaws in humour, any cracks in the plot, any decline in originality or lack of consistantcy thereof.

'...Berries' is a worthy prequel to the often over-looked 'Roof Tiling' and is worth the time of anyone who can look beyond the monotonous; the violent, and yes - the pornographic.

Instead of tiresome moments, cheap shots at pop-culture and corners cut in development, you see a solid story with tasteful random humour thrown in for good mix and another trip into the psyce of this artistic mystery known as David Firth.

Enjoyable for WWE fans

This was a really original piece, I'd say your best work to date. The interactivity made it enjoyable because there were so many options and outcomes. Although the graphics were fairly out of proportion and the sound quality was bad, the voice acting was still funny. If you're planning to make another version (I hope so), make it longer and patch up the sound.

Funny stuff

I especially liked the journal. I hate how emo kids are constantly whinning about being dumped and calling themselves individuals when they're really all the same (as demonstrated here).

Great solo

I loved the riff, but it was a bit too muffled and I didn't really like the drumming, but the solo more than made up for it.